Quote Originally Posted by Rooz View Post
My apologies. That shot makes far more sense as a poster. I missed the context.

RE: my suggestions, it is of course only my opinion. But those principals should be considered regardless of the project. If for no other reason than to break the shackles of convention and try new things. Very little good photography these days is so rigid and structured. the really good stuff has infinitely more emphasis placed on creative content expressed uniquely and engaging the audience rather than documentary styled images.
I agree with a number of the thoughts and suggestions given by Rooz. Seems that the concept could have benefitted from the models performing a scripted action with shots as they moved through the scene rather than posed on the stairway.

Also, maybe it's just me, but there is something really funky about the flames on the candelabra. Looks as though they were added in after the shoot and not well blended.