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mladjo
10-21-2008, 03:24 PM
Hi guys,
Today I had my first shoot with female model. It was very strange at first, but later I managed to get some decent shots. This was just a test shooting without a concept.
Enjoy
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/DSC_0162-1.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/ColdBW-1.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/MC-1.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/Jovana.jpg

Shaft
10-21-2008, 04:55 PM
Looks great, good looking model :)

jcon
10-21-2008, 09:32 PM
Not bad for your first shoot with a female. I assume youre looking for C&C since you posted them here. I would say that there isnt much seperation between th model and the background, which to me, takes away from the image. I dont know what your settings were, but try to blur the background a bit more to draw the focus to the model. Like you did in the last image, that one looks great! Do you have any in color?

All in all, though, good job and thanks for sharing!

mladjo
10-21-2008, 10:04 PM
Thx for the input. My setup was one SB800 with reflective umbrella in the upper left corner. I made a lot of photos, many of them in color, just didn't have the time to process it :)

Shaft
10-22-2008, 04:49 AM
my favorite is number #3. I like pictures when the subject isn't placed on the middle of the photo, rather on the side instead. It makes you focus on the graffiti on the walls as well as the model.

alessy
10-22-2008, 05:07 AM
Mladjo veoma dobro si to izveo.
Samo tako dalje...
Dobar model !

Čekam još na koju barvnu sliku .

Ajde.

Rooz
10-22-2008, 05:08 AM
i agree with J about the first 2. i think she was too close to the wall and without the white jacket she blends in a little much. i like #4 aswell for anyone else...but it imo it lacks the orginality and edginess that i love about your style so i cant say its a winner for me.

the composition, lighting, models expression/ pose of #3 is perfect imo. its a beautifully executed shot. its got that dirty, urban, gritty feel to it. love it.

eddie_dane
10-22-2008, 05:47 AM
I think you need to direct your model to be aware of where the light is. #1 is a good example of that. Unless you are going for some serious editorial look, casting shadows on the fact, for the most part, is not flattering.

I agree, #3 is a real winner.

mladjo
10-22-2008, 09:34 AM
Thx guys a lot. Your inputs are appreciated.

A bit more.

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/Beauty-1.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/Natural-1.jpg
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/Queen-1.jpg

aparmley
10-22-2008, 01:24 PM
Looks good from here. No complaints.

Fiasco
10-22-2008, 05:03 PM
Good work. I love the 2nd and 4th pictures from the original post. Reminds me of something I would do.

jcon
10-23-2008, 12:25 AM
Thx guys a lot. Your inputs are appreciated.

A bit more.

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff175/mlakilud/Beauty-1.jpg




Now this one I REALLY like. Just a little PP and its a real winner! That scar on the shoulder is very distracting though.