You spent a loot of time looking up, I'll admit. The images are very linear ... but, personally, I would have some fun correcting parallax in some of them.
Good job getting out with the "kit" ... you seem to have a better copy than most do. Anyway, in the first image, I would have "cloned out" the light pole ... cause that just sucks in the image. Then, I would have cropped for effect ... eliminating any sub-subjects.
I don't know ... maybe like this?
Last edited by DonSchap; 01-09-2009 at 10:54 PM.
Don Schap - BFA, Digital Photography A Photographer Is Forever
Look, I did not create the optical laws of the Universe ... I simply learned to deal with them.
Remember: It is usually the GLASS, not the camera (except for moving to Full Frame), that gives you the most improvement in your photography. flickr® & Sdi
Yes, the "kit lens" ... and I think you will really enjoy the TAMRON SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di-II LD Aspherical (IF) lens, if you get one.
normally, a kit lens is like adding bleach to your colors ... just washes them right out.
Don Schap - BFA, Digital Photography A Photographer Is Forever
Look, I did not create the optical laws of the Universe ... I simply learned to deal with them.
Remember: It is usually the GLASS, not the camera (except for moving to Full Frame), that gives you the most improvement in your photography. flickr® & Sdi
I personally like the one of th "KPMG" building. Something about the way the reflection being distorted draws my eye to it. Stop light also looks good...
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