Experimental - Kiss

[Paradox]

Experimental shot, I'm just looking for some comments and critique on it really. Anything you have to say is welcome, no matter how harsh it is. :) As a note the couple wanted photographs done, I didn't just sneak up on them with a camera. :eek:

http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv135/Phenomenological/IMG_4227BWSmall.jpg

[Rooz]

i think it looks spectacular. (apart from the square crop)

[K1W1]

I think it needs an eye for the person on the left. To me the left side of the image is a bit of a blank.
I like the lighting and the concept and the expression of tenderness which you have captured very well.

[faisal]

Ditto^^^^^

[Paradox]

i think it looks spectacular. (apart from the square crop)

Thank you - What is it about the square crop you don't like?


I think it needs an eye for the person on the left. To me the left side of the image is a bit of a blank.
I like the lighting and the concept and the expression of tenderness which you have captured very well.


Ditto^^^^^

I agree that the composition isn't fantastic that's the images main failing, it needs more on the left, but unfortunately there wasn't more on the left. The circumstances at the time made framing rather difficult and I only got the one shot at it!

[Dread Pirate Roberts]

What about getting them to hold for a shot just before impact