View Full Version : "The Trap" C&C please, title reccomendation too
drama
08-27-2007, 11:23 PM
So I went for a rare morning walk & came across this
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1256/1254394533_95531118ab_o.jpg
What do you think ?
Paradox
08-28-2007, 12:33 AM
Nice shot. Only thing I'd say is that the barbed wire almost looks over-sharpened on the right hand side. Nothing overly important though, and it could just be the light.
drama
08-28-2007, 12:40 AM
Paradox :
Thanks :)
Well spotted, I was a bit annoyed by the blur/OOF bit of wire on the left side, which made the right side wire look over sharpened
Havent applied any USM here, just curves
I am posting a different version where the left side looks a bit blurry
check out my flickr page for a larger view
drama
08-29-2007, 07:53 AM
Giving this a bump, this as the flickr link had died
michaelb
08-29-2007, 08:33 AM
Paradox :
Thanks :)
Well spotted, I was a bit annoyed by the blur/OOF bit of wire on the left side, which made the right side wire look over sharpened
Havent applied any USM here, just curves
I am posting a different version where the left side looks a bit blurry
check out my flickr page for a larger view
I agree with you - the OOF wire on the left is distracting, but I love feel of this shot.
nqjudo
08-29-2007, 09:29 AM
Hey Drama, have you considered 'Marriage' for the title?
adam75south
08-29-2007, 09:31 AM
you always have amazing pictures. this one is pretty much awesome. the out of focus wire doesn't bother me at all. besides, not alot you can do about that with such small dof.
drama
08-29-2007, 10:16 AM
Thanks michaelb :)
ngjudo thanks :)
"Marriage" sounds intriguing, please elaborate
adam75south thanks :)
You are embarassing me :D
The shallow DOF is the limitation here, if I had gone for a narrower aperure, it would have killed the background blur
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