"In the shadow" C&C please

[drama]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1126/1215032180_f747a09d65.jpg

What do you think ?

[adam75south]

freakin love it. what is it?

[toriaj]

Very nice, I like the idea. I wish the bottle was clearer, and maybe a little more space around the top and right. But a great job nevertheless.

[drama]

Thanks adam75south & toriaj :)

The bottle was shot through a piece of black netting, I was trying out the look
Heres version II

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1085/1218741853_59360f7cf3.jpg

[Dawoofo]

Very cool and creative picture--two thumbs up. :)

I like the first version the best.

[toriaj]

I like the brighter, clearer view of the 2nd one, but the angle doesn't work for me. Do you have a "straight" one in the series?

[drama]

Thanks dawoofo :)
Toriaj, thanks again for the feedback, nope no straight one sorry

[coldrain]

The bottle and light on the floor just feel way too small in the frame, for me.
I keep trying to figure out why, why that composition and why the big empty space, but it does not make sense to me... so, nice, but I would rethink the composition.

[drama]

Cold Rain:
Thanks :)
you are right about the negative space, there is too much of it & it kind of unhinges the composition
Was a bit restricted as I was only carrying the 70 200, shall retry this with the Sigma

[No Control]

I have to agree with coldrain. Something is just not right with the composition. The idea and contrast are great though!

[drama]

No Control :
Thanks for the feedback :)

[toriaj]

Hey Drama, I just had an idea ...
In the 2nd photo, you can see the cap on the bottle a little. Might it look better with no cap?

[drama]

Thanks toriaj :)
sounds good, will give it a try