Critic my photo please

[katie2279]

This is a photo I took of my daughter for Halloween. I know it isnt the best, but I was wondering what I could have done to make it better. I hate the fact that I got all the toys in the pic, but she will not sit still long enough for me to take a pic. I will post a few and see if anyone has any suggestions.
Thank you,

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/mommytoabbie2605/P1010241.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/mommytoabbie2605/P1010242.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b163/mommytoabbie2605/P1010273.jpg

[RichNY]

You have a beautiful model!

A few things:

The redeye in the last photo should be corrected in software. It comes from using the built in flash on your Olympus camera.

The composition of the images would benefit by not placing your subject in the center of the frame. She should ideally be approx. 1/3 from the left or right edge.

The first and third shots might have been improved if you were shooting at her height like you did in photo number 2.

Looking forward to seeing more pictures- she is adorable.

[toriaj]

She is a cutie! :D

I think her face is best exposed in #1. I also like the motion blur in the "antennae" :D Pic 3 looks a little dark, especially on my monitor.

Good shots, and I'm sure they'll get better and better.

[D Thompson]

Definitely a cutie. Just a couple of quick things. Get down to her level & watch your crops a little closer. 2nd shot looks over-exposed. Hope this helps & good luck trying to get her to sit still. :D